Hisaki Hayata Vice Captain
Posts : 22 Join date : 2009-02-27 Age : 27 Location : Estonia
Character Name: Hisaki Hayata
| Subject: Final Hisaki Bankai Training Sun Mar 15, 2009 9:17 am | |
| Final Part:Bankai Final Day ''Must cut your wings,i don't get it''Kamikaze turned into bird and maked the area stormy''Let's begin''Hisaki jumped at him,tried to hit but it went throught''What''Kamikaze send some cutting windwhril at him''I won't hold back,you want bankai,then just win''Hisaki shunpoed away and tried to call shikai but nothing happen.''Damn,i can't call the shikai out,but how can i cut the wings then''''Call more reiatsu,use what did you learn''DouHisaki appeared ''Take this you freaky bird''DouHisaki gathered massive reiatsu into sword and massive destruction happend''How's that feel''Kamikaze was still flying in the air''How,take this you freaking bird''Massive reiatsu,sword,spear,wings,everythingThese are Hisaki thoughts nowHisaki took over the body and jumped right throught the Kamikaze Kamikaze was confused what was he thinking''Look back''Hisaki swinged sword throught the Kamikaze,gathered all the Kamikaze reiatsu into sword and released within him''This powed,it's great''Little smoke and dust cloud was around Hisaki.After the cloud dissapeard Hisaki looked like DeadAngle. Right wing was covered with feathers,other was bloody and messed up.He had Spear with three Zig-Zag blade and had Skull on it.Other side had blade like circle with spikes.And after that he turned into normal body.''Great,i will accept my power to you,Hisaki,and i will let you know the BanKai tech''Hisaki woke up his bed,he had fever and he was hungry. He ate apples,drink tea and went bed. In the morning fever was gone,he was full of energy and he didn't tell about the bankai and the tech The end Ok this is Hisaki style of Bankai training Please let me know your answers about the story. | |
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Hiruma Primera Espada
Posts : 17 Join date : 2009-02-23 Age : 29 Location : Finland
Character Name: Hiruma Youichi
| Subject: Re: Final Hisaki Bankai Training Sat Mar 21, 2009 11:13 am | |
| DUde you need 1500 words in total to obtain it . | |
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Hisaki Hayata Vice Captain
Posts : 22 Join date : 2009-02-27 Age : 27 Location : Estonia
Character Name: Hisaki Hayata
| Subject: Re: Final Hisaki Bankai Training Sat Mar 21, 2009 11:55 am | |
| - Hiruma wrote:
- DUde you need 1500 words in total to obtain it .
But doesn't all the parts counts as something 1500 words. Damn,i worked so hard to even make it. I lack in english so it's hard to make it for me Even i'm learned english like 7 years and still my english sucks. And you arrancars don't have to do something like Bankai training. And how many words did i have in all parts ? | |
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Hiruma Primera Espada
Posts : 17 Join date : 2009-02-23 Age : 29 Location : Finland
Character Name: Hiruma Youichi
| Subject: Re: Final Hisaki Bankai Training Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:18 pm | |
| We tthe first 4 Espada have to write 3000 word training to get Segundo Etapa . And the others need 10000 words and simple Arrancar need 100000 words . So Dont whine . I will accept it when it is 1500 words . I didnt count how much words but it simply isnt 1500 . Oh and I advise you to write in paragraph . People will like it more . | |
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Hisaki Hayata Vice Captain
Posts : 22 Join date : 2009-02-27 Age : 27 Location : Estonia
Character Name: Hisaki Hayata
| Subject: Re: Final Hisaki Bankai Training Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:22 pm | |
| - Hiruma wrote:
- We tthe first 4 Espada have to write 3000 word training to get Segundo Etapa . And the others need 10000 words and simple Arrancar need 100000 words . So Dont whine . I will accept it when it is 1500 words . I didnt count how much words but it simply isnt 1500 . Oh and I advise you to write in paragraph . People will like it more .
I got something like 1000+ words but kaing 100000 words text is like a book. And did you make the story ? | |
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Hisaki Hayata Vice Captain
Posts : 22 Join date : 2009-02-27 Age : 27 Location : Estonia
Character Name: Hisaki Hayata
| Subject: Re: Final Hisaki Bankai Training Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:24 pm | |
| - Hiruma wrote:
- We tthe first 4 Espada have to write 3000 word training to get Segundo Etapa . And the others need 10000 words and simple Arrancar need 100000 words . So Dont whine . I will accept it when it is 1500 words . I didnt count how much words but it simply isnt 1500 . Oh and I advise you to write in paragraph . People will like it more .
Ok but i will make the story longer then and then put in here | |
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